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jdhill's comments
Posted Wed, Oct 7, 7:31 a.m.
As a copyeditor, copywriter (and rewriter), and teacher of writing, I can agree with much of what Davis says here, but I would say the most critical issue isn't sentence length but sentence cohesion. The downfall of the long-strung-together sentences Davis (and we all) dislike is the ambiguity of the ...
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